Friday, December 31, 2010

Some Dialogue First

So piggybacking on the idea of drawing some comics pages for writers to dialogue, and a follow-up notion of writing dialogue first, here is some dialogue.

I'm giving no directions for character designs, setting etc. Purely dialogue enough to draw a page or two, if you like.

A few artists at PnP have picked up on this... you could too if you like the idea.

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1_ YOU CAN GO IF YOU WANT ERIC, BUT I'M NOT LETTING YOU GO ALONE. I'M COMING TOO.

2_ WE'VE BEEN OVER THIS BEFORE SHEILA. YOU'RE NOT--

3_ I AM!

4_ LOOK, IT WOULD BE BETTER IF YOU TOOK THE CHANGE WITH YOU TO SEE GRANNY IN COVERTON. SHE'LL KNOW WHAT TO DO.

5_ GRANNY DOES WANT TO SEE ME AND BESIDES, SHE CAN'T ENDURE CONTACT WITH THE CHANGE.

6_ SHE'LL BE ALRIGHT AND YOU'LL BE SAFE.

7_ THE CHANGE WILL KILL HER AND I'M NOT ALRIGHT WITH THAT.

8_ SHEILA, IF YOU COME WITH ME IT COULD, IT WILL GET VERY BAD.

9_ I COULD MAKE THE DIFFERENCE, ERIC.

10_ SARAH, TALK SOME SENSE TO HER.

11_ NO. SHE'S RIGHT, ERIC. SHE HAS TO COME WITH YOU.

12_ MY GOD, IF THE CHANGE FINISHES TAKING HER WHILE WE'RE INSIDE, WE'RE DEAD.

13_ IF THE CHANGE FINISHES TAKING ME ANYWHERE, WE'RE ALL DEAD. BUT INSIDE, WE HAVE A CHANCE. I'M COMING WITH YOU, ERIC.

CAPTION: AND SO IT WAS SETTLED.

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