I assume they'll get better names, and probably some changes to their look and the art style as well, but this was a first pass at a sample. One thing... I may do the grays in pencil. Or at least. some textures.
That's "the take" in comedic terms. The double take would be if she turns away and then looks back. I never thought the double take worked well in comics.
Hmmm, I would say that the lettering doesn't read so well. Either I need to make it larger, or work with a font that reads better at this resolution.
ReplyDeleteLove the look she gives him in panel 3.
ReplyDeleteThat's "the take" in comedic terms. The double take would be if she turns away and then looks back. I never thought the double take worked well in comics.
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